When Mark came up from the basement, his face looked like he’d seen a ghost. This is a man who served three tours overseas, fixed bridges under mortar fire, and never once lost his cool. But now he was pale, silent, his hands trembling just slightly as he grabbed his jacket from the chair.
“Lauren,” he said, his voice flat and sharp. “Pack your gear. We’re leaving. Don’t call your sister.”
I blinked at him. “What? What are you talking about?”
He didn’t answer. Just kept moving, checking the windows, glancing toward the front door like something might burst through at any second.
“Mark,” I said again, louder this time. “What’s going on?”
He looked at me finally, his eyes cold and focused. “Please, just trust me. We need to leave this house right now.”
I stared at him, trying to make sense of what I was seeing. I’d known Mark Given since my first deployment. He wasn’t dramatic. He wasn’t paranoid. If he said something wasn’t safe, it wasn’t safe. Still, this was my home. Or at least what was left of it after everything.
“My sister will freak out if we just—”
“Lauren.” His voice cracked like a whip. “Do not call her. Not now.”
That’s when I saw the look in his eyes. Fear. Not panic, not anger, but something colder. Controlled fear. The kind that meant he’d already seen something he couldn’t unsee.
Ten minutes later, we were throwing duffel bags into the back of his truck. My phone kept lighting up on the counter. Monica, Monica, Monica, calling over and over again. I almost answered once, my thumb hovering over the screen, but Mark snatched the phone from my hand. “You want to live? Don’t pick up.”
I didn’t argue again.
The night air outside was heavy with rain. The house behind us sat quiet and perfect. The kind of quiet that felt wrong. Every light off, every window closed. It was the same house we grew up in, the one my father built after he retired from the Corps of Engineers. He called it “The Fort.” Solid, practical, efficient, just like him. Now it felt like something else entirely.
We got into the truck. Mark started the engine, and the headlights cut through the wet dark. For a moment, I looked back at the porch light, that little square of yellow my sister had installed herself. She said it made the place look warmer. It looked like a trap now.
Mark drove fast but steady. No music, no small talk. Just the wipers scraping back and forth and the low hum of the engine. I wanted to ask questions, but the words stuck in my throat. Instead, I watched the street lights blur past, thinking about how the last few weeks had gone from homecoming to something I couldn’t even name.
Three months ago, I’d been a Captain in the Army Corps of Engineers, stationed at Fort Leonard Wood. Fifteen years in uniform, multiple deployments, commendations, and enough scars—inside and out—to last a lifetime. When I finally signed the discharge papers, I thought I was ready to come home.
Monica picked me up at the bus station. She hugged me like she meant it, crying just a little. Said she’d been fixing up Dad’s old place for me. Made it energy-efficient, new vents, sealed windows, all that. Said it would feel “fresh” again.
It did. Too fresh. Too still. The air in that house didn’t move right, but I didn’t think much of it at first. Now, sitting in Mark’s truck, I was starting to realize maybe I should have.
The rain turned into a downpour. The highway stretched empty ahead of us. Mark’s jaw worked as he clenched and unclenched it, like he was debating whether to speak. I broke first. “You want to tell me what the hell just happened back there?”
He didn’t look at me. “I’ll tell you when we’re clear.”
“Clear of what? My sister’s driveway?”
He sighed. “Clear of her reach.”
That shut me up. We drove another ten minutes before he pulled into a gas station that looked like it hadn’t seen business since the ’90s. One flickering light above the pumps. The rain softened to a mist. Mark cut the engine.
“You remember how your dad used to run the generator test every month?”
“Yeah,” I said. “Said it was good discipline.”
“He ever tell you why he did it?”
“Because he didn’t trust the power company.”
Mark nodded, staring out the windshield. “He didn’t trust a lot of people. He built that house to be self-contained. Air system, water system, everything. He built it so his family could survive anything.”
“Yeah, I know all that. What’s your point?”
“My point,” he said slowly, “is that someone’s been modifying it.”
I frowned. “Monica’s been remodeling. You know that.”
“This wasn’t remodeling. This was engineering.” He turned toward me then, serious as I’d ever seen him. “There’s a system running under that house that your father didn’t install. And it’s not for heating or cooling.”
My pulse spiked. “What are you talking about?”
“I found lines. Metallic, narrow, rerouted into the ventilation shafts. And a small box near the water heater, with electrical hookups that don’t belong to any standard system. There’s a timer attached.”
“A timer for what?”
Mark just shook his head. “Not sure yet. But whatever it’s for, it’s not good. You’ve been getting headaches lately, right?”
That caught me off guard. “How did you—”
“You mentioned it last week. Dizziness, nausea. You thought it was PTSD.”
“Yeah. So?”
He looked at me, and for a second I saw something that scared me more than his words: certainty. “Lauren,” he said quietly. “I think someone’s trying to poison you.”
The world went still. Just the sound of rain against the windshield. I laughed, but it came out thin, high. “That’s ridiculous. Monica would never.”
He cut me off. “You sure about that?”
I wanted to say yes. Fast, loud, certain. But the truth stuck in my throat. For weeks, she’d been… hovering. Too sweet, too helpful. Bringing me cups of tea I didn’t ask for. Replacing the air filters herself “just to help.” Locking the basement door, saying she’d lost the key. I thought she was just being Monica. Now, sitting in the dark, Mark’s words hanging in the air, it didn’t feel like that anymore.
He reached into his pocket and pulled out his phone, swiping through pictures. “Look.” On the screen were photos of the basement pipes, a control box, something that looked like a gas valve connected to a digital timer.
“This isn’t just amateur work, Mark said. “Whoever did this knows flow systems. Understands how to control air distribution. Your sister’s boyfriend, what’s his name again?”
“Evan,” I said slowly. “Evan Lere.”
Mark’s jaw tightened. “Yeah. He used to work for Beckett Industrial, right? Your dad’s old company.”
I nodded.
“Got fired for safety violations? Three years before your dad died?”
That was news to me. I stared at the photos again. My stomach turned cold. Mark leaned back, still watching me. “You starting to see it?”
“No,” I said automatically. “No, I’m not.”
But I was. Every headache. Every dizzy spell. Every night I’d woken up short of breath. They all fit together now, too perfectly.
Mark started the truck again. “We’re going to the motel off Route 7. Somewhere with fresh air. After that, we’ll figure out what to do next.”
I didn’t answer. I just stared out the window as the house that used to feel like safety disappeared behind us, swallowed by the rain and the dark. The phone in my lap started buzzing again. Monica. Mark didn’t even look. “Don’t pick up,” he said quietly.
I didn’t.
THE MOTEL AND THE MOTIVE
The motel room smelled like bleach and stale air. I sat on the edge of the bed while the TV muttered some late-night infomercial. My hands wouldn’t stop shaking. Mark was pacing, phone in one hand, the other still stained with dirt from the basement.
When the rain finally stopped, the silence was almost worse. Mark sat down across from me. “You look like you haven’t slept in days.”
“I haven’t,” I said. “Hard to sleep when your sister might be trying to kill you.”
He gave me a look, halfway between sympathy and disbelief. “You don’t know that yet.”
“Don’t I? Right now, it’s the only thing that makes sense.” He didn’t argue. He just pulled a file from his bag. Army habit. “I did some digging before I came by tonight. Didn’t tell you because I wasn’t sure what I was seeing.”
“Digging into what?”
He laid out printouts. “Building permits. Your sister filed them six months ago. ‘Upgrading the heating system.’ For ‘better insulation.’ That’s when the first modifications showed up.”
“Six months?” I muttered. “That’s around the time I put in my retirement request.”
“Yeah,” Mark said quietly. “Almost like she was getting ready for your homecoming.”
The idea hit like a punch. I pushed the papers away. “You’re saying she planned this?”
“I’m saying nothing about this was random. Whoever helped her knew exactly what they were doing. Those weren’t home improvement tweaks. They were structural alterations.”
My throat went dry. “You think Evan’s involved?”
“He used to be a systems tech for your dad’s company,” Mark nodded. “He had access to blueprints, materials… stuff most people wouldn’t even think to use in a house.”
“So, what? He teams up with Monica and they decide to gas me like a rat?”
Mark’s jaw tightened. “I’ve seen people kill for less. Money. Revenge. Maybe both.”
Revenge. The word made my chest tighten. My father, John Beckett, wasn’t a man people crossed. He ran his company with military precision, expected the same from everyone. Including his kids. Monica never forgave him for that. She said he treated her like a project, not a daughter. When he died, she inherited half of everything—money, property, equipment. I didn’t want my share, I was still in the service. I told her to keep it. She said, “That’s exactly what he would have done. Favor the soldier over the family.” I hadn’t thought much of it then. Now, it felt like a warning I’d ignored.
Mark broke the silence. “Lauren, I know you don’t want to believe it, but this isn’t bad wiring. That setup in your basement… someone engineered it to kill you slowly. Carbon monoxide leaks, controlled doses, fake detectors. If we hadn’t checked, you’d be dead in a month.”
I didn’t respond. I just kept hearing Monica’s voice, laughing, saying she’d make the place feel like home again. She’d made it feel like a coffin.
Mark stood. “I’m going to make some calls. Old contacts at the county office. See if there’s anything else.” He grabbed his jacket. “Stay here. Lock the door. Don’t answer for anyone. Especially her.”
He left. The clock said 3:17 AM. I lay down but didn’t close my eyes. My head ached. I thought about calling Monica, just to ask her why. But every time I reached for the phone, I remembered Mark’s words. You want to live? Don’t pick up.
THE CHASE AND THE PROOF
The next morning, Mark came back with coffee and a manila folder. “Evan’s company, Lared Systems. Small-time maintenance contractor. They’ve been subcontracted for multiple ventilation projects. One of them,” he tapped the folder, “was your house.”
“Let me guess, he used it to get access to materials?”
“More than that. My buddy at the city inspection office… they flagged a report from one of his old job sites. A CO leak in a senior housing complex. No casualties, but suspicious. The report vanished before it hit the county database.”
“So, he’s done this before.”
“He’s careful,” Mark nodded. “He knows how to make it look like an accident. Or a health condition… like PTSD.”
The room spun. The VA doctor had said my symptoms were stress-related. “That’s exactly what they wanted you to think,” Mark said, his voice grim.
I wasn’t a soldier anymore. I was a target. “What now? We can’t go to the police with a theory.”
“We don’t have to. We get proof. Real physical proof. I’ll need to go back into that basement. But not tonight.”
“Why not?”
“Because they’ll be watching. Once they realize we’re gone, they’ll check the house. We need to be smart.”
“Smart?” I said bitterly. “Mark, my sister might be plotting my murder, and you want to wait?”
He didn’t flinch. “I want you alive. That’s all.”
That shut me up. He left again. I watched the peeling wallpaper. My phone buzzed. Private number. I shouldn’t have answered.
“Lauren?” Monica’s voice. Calm, steady, familiar. “You didn’t answer my calls. Are you okay?”
My mouth moved before my brain caught up. “I’m fine.”
“Mark’s been acting strange. I saw his truck near the house. What’s going on?”
My pulse kicked. “Nothing. Just… maintenance stuff.”
She laughed, low and easy. “You sound nervous. Did something happen?”
I didn’t answer. “Lauren,” she said again, “You know you can trust me, right?” The line crackled. I could almost hear her smiling.
“Of course,” I said, my voice steadying. “Always.” I hung up.
My head throbbed. I went to a diner across the street for toast. As I sat in the booth, my phone buzzed again. Unknown number. “Captain Beckett.”
“This is Dr. Raymond Clark from the VA hospital in Springfield. You came in for testing last week, correct?”
“Yeah.”
“I’m calling because your results flagged elevated carbon monoxide exposure. Have you had your home systems checked recently?”
My grip tightened on the phone. “Yeah. I had someone take a look.”
“I recommend staying somewhere else until a certified inspector clears your residence. Symptoms like headaches, fatigue, or confusion can worsen with continued exposure.”
“Yeah, I’ll take care of it.”
“Ma’am,” he paused. “Are you currently in a safe environment?”
The question hit hard. “I think so. Thanks, Doctor.”
When I hung up, I saw it. Across the street. A dark blue sedan. Tinted windows, no front plates. Same one I’d seen outside my house. Not a coincidence.
I left cash on the table and walked out. Back in the motel, the air felt heavier. The moment I closed the door, I smelled it—faint, metallic, like exhaust. The vent was humming, though the AC was off. I grabbed a chair, yanked the cover off. Taped inside, a cheap CO detector, blinking green. Too green. Faking a signal loop.
The door handle moved. Slow. Deliberate. I drew the knife from my boot, stepped aside.
“Lauren? It’s me.”
I let out a shaky breath, opened the door. Mark stood there, soaked in sweat. “You okay?”
“I am now,” I said, sliding the knife back. “Planning to knock next time?”
“We’ve got a problem.” He set his phone on the table. GPS pins. “Evan’s van made three trips to your property. Late at night. Used a business account to access restricted materials—pressure valves, solenoid timers. Same components I saw.”
“So it’s official. A death trap.”
“Worse. It’s designed to mimic slow-onset CO exposure. Releases gas only when the furnace kicks on at night. You just feel sick, sleep more, fade out. No struggle. Everyone blames PTSD.”
My stomach turned. “Jesus Christ.”
“The VA report confirmed your blood levels,” he said grimly. “You were about two weeks away from permanent damage.”
I sank into the chair. “There’s more,” Mark said. “Evan’s company… it’s not registered to him anymore. It’s registered to Monica.”
“You’re sure?”
“Majority owner. Filed last spring. Right after you told her you were coming home.”
“Of course she did.”
“We need evidence,” Mark said. “Proof that ties both of them to that system. We go back. Document everything. Photos, recordings.”
I looked at the window. The blue sedan was parked across the street again. Closer. “Pretty sure they already know.”
Mark cursed, pulled the curtain. “All right, change of plan. We keep moving. They can’t track what isn’t still.” He grabbed his bag. “There’s a safe house near Fairview. Old training property. No one knows it exists but a handful of us. We leave in five.”
“Mark,” I said, looking at the vent. “Why me?”
He looked at me for a long moment. “Because you’re the one thing your father loved that she couldn’t control.”
THE SAFE HOUSE AND THE CONFRONTATION
We drove west, back roads, headlights off. My thoughts kept circling back to Monica, to our father. Desperation makes people do things they swear they’d never do. The safe house was an old training cabin, hidden off a logging trail. Dust, cots, rations. Safe.
By sunrise, Mark was brewing instant coffee. “Ready?”
“Define ‘ready’?”
“Ready enough to find out what your sister’s been doing in your basement.”
We drove back, parked two blocks away. Wore caps, hoodies. Neighborhood was quiet, lawns mowed. Looked painfully normal. I used the spare key Dad gave me, the one she didn’t know about.
The house smelled like lemon cleaner and chemicals. Mark moved first, tactical, scanning. I followed. Kitchen spotless. Family photos smiling on the wall. Me and her at Dad’s retirement. She looked so proud. Or maybe that was just the performance.
Basement door. New lock. Mark’s toolkit made short work of it. The air that hit us was thick, sour.
Flashlight beams cut the dark. The basement was different. New drywall over the concrete. Dad’s workbench? Gone.
“She gutted it,” I whispered.
“No,” Mark knelt by the wall. “She covered it.” He pried open a bulge in the drywall. Behind it: a maze of copper tubing, valves, wires. “Same system. But this…” He pointed to a silver box wired to a digital timer. “This is industrial. Not Home Depot.”
He pulled aside some insulation. Black marker on the new drywall: PR2.
“What does that mean?”
Mark frowned. “Project Renewal. That’s what your dad called his prototype for an automated air filtration system. He scrapped it. Unstable. Could back-feed exhaust into sealed rooms.”
“She rebuilt Dad’s failed project? And weaponized it?”
My chest tightened. Mark was already snapping photos. “We need every angle. Valves, control box, timers…”
My boot hit something hollow. A hatch in the floor, hidden under dust. We pried it open. Inside, a black plastic case, duct-taped shut. Mark cut the tape. Inside: papers, a hard drive, a flash drive labeled “RENEWAL DATA.”
I picked up a schematic. Detailed airflow models. CO distribution patterns. Exposure timelines. And at the bottom, a note. Neat, block letters.
Test Subject: L. Beckett. Estimated Exposure: 4-6 months. Symptom onset consistent with PTSD misdiagnosis.
I forgot how to breathe. “She wrote this… like a research project,” I whispered.
Mark pocketed the drives. “We’ve got enough to bury them.”
A creak. Upstairs. Mark froze, clicked off his light. Light shifted near the basement door. Someone was home. He motioned to the side exit. I moved, silent. The latch popped.
Footsteps above stopped. “Go,” Mark whispered.
We slipped out, crouched low, moved along the house, hit the tree line. Didn’t breathe until we were 50 yards away. Mark stopped, turned off his flashlight. “She knows.”
We drove to another motel, rooms rented by the hour. I sat on the bed and just… laughed. Short, sharp, broken sounds. Mark locked the door. “We’ve got enough for the police.”
“You really think they’ll believe my sister built a chemical murder lab in my basement?”
“They’ll believe the schematics,” he said. “And the recordings.”
“What recordings?”
He pulled a small black device from his jacket. “Body cam. Had it running since we stepped inside.”
My phone buzzed. Private number. Mark nodded. I answered.
“Lauren,” Monica’s voice, low, calm. “I saw you at the house.”
My throat was dry.
“You shouldn’t have gone in there. You don’t understand what you’ve done.”
“What I’ve done? You built a system to kill me!”
A long pause. Then a soft, sad laugh. “You always think everything’s about you.”
“Explain the notes. ‘Test Subject L. Beckett.'”
“You wouldn’t understand. You never did. Dad ruined everything, and you just picked up where he left off.”
Mark mouthed keep her talking, hit record on his phone. “Ruined what?”
“Me!” she snapped. “He made me feel small every day! Then you came back, the perfect soldier daughter he always wanted. You got his respect. I got his silence! That house should have been mine alone! His company! You had to come home!”
“So you decided to erase me.”
“I decided to finish what he started. This wasn’t about killing you. It was about balance.” The line went dead.
Mark lowered his phone. “Got it all. She’s not just calculated. She’s lost.”
THE CABIN AND THE CONFRONTATION
As we pulled onto the highway, a black sedan merged three cars back. “Company,” Mark muttered. He lost them at a truck stop in Branson, parking behind trailers. We sat, watching. The sedan never appeared.
Inside the diner, Mark connected the hard drive. “Project Renewal Phase 2.” Logs, schematics. “These are military-grade parameters,” he frowned. “Concentration levels, duration… someone used official research.”
“Evan,” I said. “Defense contractors.”
He found the correspondence. Evan Lere to “MH.” Progress steady. Phase 2 retrofit complete. Subject showing early stage symptoms. Recommend activating backup system if exposure interrupted.
“Backup system?”
He scrolled. “Failsafe Diagram: Vent Override.” A second valve network, hidden. “Manual activation,” he read, “or remote signal.”
“They can trigger it from anywhere.”
He found the ledger. Purchases split between Lared Systems (Evan) and Hail Home Design… Monica’s company. She funded it. “And look at the quantities,” Mark said. “Enough for two or three properties.”
“You think they’ve done this before?”
“Maybe,” he said grimly. “Perfect for insurance fraud. Undetectable.”
We needed someone to trust. “Chief Daniels,” I said. “Dad’s old Army buddy. He helped with my enlistment.”
Mark used a burner phone. “Daniels.”
“Chief, it’s Lauren Beckett. I’m in trouble. Serious trouble.”
A pause. “You safe? …Okay. Dad’s old cabin, Miller Creek. One hour. Bring whoever’s with you. Don’t call again.” Line dead.
The cabin was dark, rain starting again. Daniels was on the porch, smoking. “Captain. Heard you retired.”
“Trying to.”
Mark handed him the flash drive. “Everything’s in there. Blueprints, data, confession.”
Daniels plugged it into his tablet. His face tightened as he scrolled. “Jesus Christ. This is deliberate. Attempted murder, interstate conspiracy… Lauren, you need to disappear.”
Headlights cut through the gravel. Two vehicles. SUV and a pickup. Daniels dropped his cigarette. “Too late. They found you.”
“Back exit!” Daniels barkd. Mark grabbed the drive, pushed me toward the kitchen.
“Lauren!” Monica’s voice, sweet, terrifying. “Come on out! I just want to talk!”
Daniels’ voice from the porch: “You’re trespassing, ma’am!”
Monica: “So is the basement she broke into! We’re just collecting what’s ours!”
The sound of a gun cocking. Daniels: “Leave. While you can.”
A thud. Flashbang. Mark tackled me, the explosion rattled my teeth. White light, shouting, then gunfire from the cabin.
Mark dragged me toward the back fence. We hit the gate, scrambled over, dropped onto the service road. “Run!” We ran, adrenaline searing my lungs, until the cabin lights were a dim glow, the gunshots fading.
We found an old Chevy in a gravel lot, keys in it. “Borrowing,” Mark muttered. No signal. “They knew where we were,” Mark drove, his face grim. “Daniels’ line was tapped, or someone’s feeding them.”
“You think Daniels…?”
“No. Monica’s not working blind.”
We ditched the Chevy, hitched a ride with a trucker heading south. I leaned against the window, watching the miles roll by, seeing flames lick the cabin porch every time I closed my eyes.
THE FINAL STAND
At a truck stop at dawn, Mark made a call. I sat inside, sipping burnt coffee.
“Lauren?”
I turned. Evan. Standing by the door, smiling, hands in pockets. My hand went to the knife in my boot.
“Mind if I sit?” He sat anyway. “You look tired. How’d you find me?”
“You’re not as invisible as you think. What do you want?”
“To talk. This doesn’t have to go this way. Monica doesn’t want you dead. She wants you to understand.”
“Understand what? That she’s insane?”
“That she’s right,” he said simply. “Your father left her resentment. You got his respect. She got the house, but it meant nothing. She wanted balance. That’s all.”
“So balance means murder.”
“Balance means correction. And you’re standing in the way.” He stood, dropped a napkin. “If you go home again, it ends tonight.” He walked out.
Mark came in. “What happened?” I handed him the napkin. He crumpled it. “Then we’ll be there first.”
We drove back. Fast. “We go in, get every piece of evidence, and end this,” Mark said.
“If the department’s compromised, we’re on our own,” I said.
“Then we finish it.”
Parked a block away. Sunset. House quiet. Back door unlocked. Wrong. Air smelled like bleach and metal.
“They’ve been here,” Mark whispered, body cam running.
The lights flicked on.
“You shouldn’t have come back,” Monica said. She stood by the window, calm, arms folded.
“Where’s Evan?” Mark asked, moving, positioning himself near the basement hall.
“He’s downstairs. Finishing what you interrupted.”
“Your experiment?” I asked.
She sighed. “It was never about killing you, Lauren. It was about proving something. That Dad’s system worked. That my version worked better.”
“You used your sister as a live test subject,” Mark cut in.
“It wasn’t personal.”
“You built a gas system to make me sleep forever and call it impersonal?” I snapped.
“You left me no choice! You came home, digging through Dad’s files, claiming what wasn’t yours!” Her voice sharpened. “He loved you more! The soldier, the hero! I was just the girl who stayed home! I turned his legacy into mine!”
Behind her, at the top of the basement stairs, Evan. Holding a small transmitter.
“Step away from her,” Mark said, drawing his weapon.
Evan smirked. “Faster than me, Sergeant?”
“Stop it!” Monica’s tone sharpened. “No one’s dying!”
“Funny,” I said. “You said that about me, too.”
“Lauren,” Monica’s voice trembled. “It wasn’t supposed to go this far! Evan said it would just simulate symptoms, nothing fatal!”
“That’s a lie,” Mark said. “We found the schematics. The dosages would have killed her in days.”
Monica stared at him, wide-eyed, uncertain. “He told me…”
“You wanted results, Monica,” Evan cut her off, his voice cold. “I gave you exactly what you asked for.”
“You said it was safe!” she shrieked.
“Safe enough for someone who deserved it,” he smiled, cruel.
She lunged at him. He shoved her, hard, against the wall.
That was Mark’s opening. The shot shattered the silence. Evan staggered, dropped the transmitter, tumbled down the basement stairs. Monica screamed, ran after him.
I followed. Basement was chaos. Smoke, glass. Evan sprawled at the bottom, bleeding from the shoulder, but reaching for the transmitter. Mark kicked it away, aimed his gun. “Don’t.”
Monica knelt by Evan. “You ruined everything!” she screamed at me. “He was going to prove it worked!”
“It did work,” I said. “You just picked the wrong test subject.”
Mark pulled his phone. “Calling it in.”
Before he could dial, Monica lunged at the failsafe valve on the wall. “Don’t!” I shouted.
She twisted the handle. A sharp hiss. Gas vented through the ducts.
“Move!” Mark yelled. We scrambled up the stairs. The door slammed shut. Autolocked.
The smell hit instantly. CO. Exhaust. “Lauren, vent switch!” Mark coughed, working on the hinges with his multi-tool.
I stumbled to the control box, vision blurring. Flipped Dad’s emergency bypass. Nothing.
“You can’t stop it now!” Monica’s voice, faint, from below.
Mark slammed a crowbar against the door. Hinge cracked. “Need airflow!”
Duct above. Climbed a shelf, tore the grate open. Hiss grew. Head swimming, hands numb. Mark forced the door. Grabbed my arm, dragged me into the hall. We collapsed, coughing. Behind us, smoke filled the basement. Their voices went silent.
Mark hit 911. “Sergeant Mark Given… Address… Beckett residence… Chemical leak… Two suspects down… Two survivors… Send units now.”
I lay on the floor, staring at the ceiling.
“You alive?” he rasped.
“Barely.”
“Good enough.”
THE AFTERMATH AND THE REBUILD (UPDATE)
By the time the first patrol car arrived, the house was silent. I sat on the front steps, wrapped in a thermal blanket, watching the flashing lights paint the house red and blue. Mark was giving his statement to a paramedic, still coughing.
They brought two bodies out. One covered. Evan. The other, breathing through an oxygen mask. Monica. Her face was gray, eyes open but unfocused. She didn’t look at me as they lifted her into the ambulance.
A detective crouched in front of me. “Captain Beckett? You’re saying your sister and her boyfriend constructed a gas system… to kill you?”
“The schematics, data drives, and my teammate’s recordings are in the basement,” I said, my throat raw.
Mark walked over. “I gave them the flash drive, the schematics, and her confession recording. Should be enough.”
We spent hours at the hospital. Oxygen, blood tests. “Another few minutes in there,” the nurse said, “you wouldn’t have made it.” I just stared at the ceiling tiles.
Mark found me in the waiting room. “She’s alive,” he said. “Monica. Medical watch. Oxygen deprivation, shock. She’ll recover.” He swallowed hard. “Evan. Didn’t make it.”
I didn’t know what to feel. “She’ll stand trial,” Mark added.
“She’ll find a way,” I muttered.
“Not this time,” he said, his voice certain.
The trial was a blur. The prosecutor laid it all out: premeditation, calculation, intent. The forged permits. Evan’s emails. The schematics. My VA report. The recording of Monica’s confession. It was surgical. The defense tried to paint her as a grieving woman manipulated by Evan. But then they played the recording: “This was about balance.”
Verdict: Guilty. Attempted murder, conspiracy, fraud. 30 years, no parole. Monica just nodded, like she’d expected it.
After, I stayed in the empty courtroom. Mark leaned against the railing. “You did what you had to do.”
“I did what anyone would do,” I shook my head. “What comes after?”
He looked at me. “What comes after?”
I stared at the doors where they’d led Monica away. “She’s still my sister.” He didn’t say anything. Some silences don’t need filling.
The house was cleaned, the basement sealed. I started rebuilding. Mark came by with coffee and tools. “Thought I’d help,” he said. “Besides, you’ll need someone to hold the level.”
I grinned. “Don’t trust my precision?”
“I trust your combat aim, not your carpentry.”
We worked in silence, mostly. The good kind. Wood meeting wall, screws turning steady. “You realize,” he said one day, “this is the first time this house has felt alive since you came back?”
I paused. “Yeah. It doesn’t feel like it’s watching anymore.”
He smiled. “Your dad built this house to last. You’re just reminding it how.”
I sold half the property but kept the house and Dad’s workshop. Started taking local construction jobs—veterans’ homes, community centers. Building instead of fighting. A woman, a vet’s wife, stopped me at a job site. “My husband served with you in Kandahar,” she said. “Said you were the reason he came home.” She pressed a note into my hand. You build to protect. Don’t forget that. The same words Dad carved into the beam above his workbench.
I met Mark at that same diner months later. The coffee was still terrible. “Think you’ll ever leave town?” he asked.
“Maybe. Not yet. The house still needs me.”
“The house, huh?” He smiled. “Hell of a sentence for someone who commanded a platoon.”
“Yeah. But this mission’s quieter.”
He leaned back. “You know, you could do real good teaching at the academy. Structural safety. Field leadership. You’ve got stories that could save lives.”
“Maybe one day,” I said.
Back home, I finally unpacked the last box of photos. Hung one above the workbench: Dad, Mom, Monica, and me, years ago, by the half-built porch. She was holding the level wrong, smiling. I looked at it for a long time. The house was quiet. No hums, no hissing. Just the sound of old boards breathing. It didn’t feel like a battlefield or a memorial anymore. It just felt like home.